always0nancy
Peasant
i get that you like them! i do too!!
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Post by always0nancy on Oct 30, 2012 0:27:45 GMT -5
My eyes trailed down to the ground wondering what had just happened. Everything I had was now gone. I watched as he stepped out of my life. I watched as she stabbed my back and made the deepest wound anyone has ever given me. I stood there as she dragged my thoughts to the wrong idea. I stood there wishing he would understand. I did nothing to change it. My eyes trailed down to the ground wondering what had just happened. Everything I had was now gone. Everything I was, everything I did, was destroyed.
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Princess Cliche
Permanent Peasant and Servant to Timothy
I have challenged Skippa, and lived to tell the tale.
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Post by Princess Cliche on Oct 31, 2012 19:26:15 GMT -5
Was 'she' meant to be in there?
Other than that, I really liked it.
Thanks for writing such beautiful poetry.
Xx
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always0nancy
Peasant
i get that you like them! i do too!!
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Post by always0nancy on Nov 14, 2012 21:45:53 GMT -5
i dont know. the poem just came to me.
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