Post by avalicious on Sept 27, 2012 17:48:47 GMT -5
merp
here goes
Oh, there will be alot of <i>'s, but just ignore them because they're italics on the 1dff fanfiction site.
Zero Degrees
That day was still fresh in Harry’s mind. It creeps into his dreams, morphing them into nightmares. It creeps on him when he sees girls that resemble her in the audience during concerts. It ruins his day when the memory hits him and he just wants to curl up into a ball and cry all day. It would be far from the truth to say he hadn’t done just that before. It would be far from the truth to say that he only did that on occasions. And of course he hadn’t let any of the other band mates see, and he definitely didn’t let Reece see. He kept this sort of thing to himself; just as he kept the pictures of her to himself. Harry thought he was a pathetic hot mess when those days come. Those days that haunted him at least three times a week. Even with Reece, nothing could ever fill that void in his heart that Melody left him.
It wasn’t even when he thought about her really unpleasant departure from the world that broke his strong barrier. No, it was when he thought about the happy times. The times that he would walk into Melody’s apartment with Chinese food in hand, preparing for an amazing evening, only to hear her yelling out random phrases in the shower. Or that time that Melody had ran into his apartment with a red sheet tied around her neck, yelling “Have no fear! Supergirl is here!” The times that she made Harry laugh until his sides hurt.
Today was <i> not </i> one of those days. Today was one of those days that give Harry a reason to be ecstatic, Melody completely off of his mind. Today was one of those days that Melody hadn’t gotten a chance to creep into his mind yet. Today, Harry Styles and his new fiancée, Reece Lawrence, were going on their engagement vacation.
I have a ton more, but like. It can't be that long. so just give me some critiques on this, yeah?
here goes
Oh, there will be alot of <i>'s, but just ignore them because they're italics on the 1dff fanfiction site.
Zero Degrees
That day was still fresh in Harry’s mind. It creeps into his dreams, morphing them into nightmares. It creeps on him when he sees girls that resemble her in the audience during concerts. It ruins his day when the memory hits him and he just wants to curl up into a ball and cry all day. It would be far from the truth to say he hadn’t done just that before. It would be far from the truth to say that he only did that on occasions. And of course he hadn’t let any of the other band mates see, and he definitely didn’t let Reece see. He kept this sort of thing to himself; just as he kept the pictures of her to himself. Harry thought he was a pathetic hot mess when those days come. Those days that haunted him at least three times a week. Even with Reece, nothing could ever fill that void in his heart that Melody left him.
It wasn’t even when he thought about her really unpleasant departure from the world that broke his strong barrier. No, it was when he thought about the happy times. The times that he would walk into Melody’s apartment with Chinese food in hand, preparing for an amazing evening, only to hear her yelling out random phrases in the shower. Or that time that Melody had ran into his apartment with a red sheet tied around her neck, yelling “Have no fear! Supergirl is here!” The times that she made Harry laugh until his sides hurt.
Today was <i> not </i> one of those days. Today was one of those days that give Harry a reason to be ecstatic, Melody completely off of his mind. Today was one of those days that Melody hadn’t gotten a chance to creep into his mind yet. Today, Harry Styles and his new fiancée, Reece Lawrence, were going on their engagement vacation.
I have a ton more, but like. It can't be that long. so just give me some critiques on this, yeah?