[original] "Let You Go"

[Princess Cliche]

Title: Let You Go
Warnings: Uhm, none for this one, but guys, I write bakoodles of Poetry,so you'll probably be seeing me here a lot.

It's time to let you go,
You aren't good for me anymore,
It's hard for me to do,
But it's my heart that's torn

I remember the first time I saw you
You made a joke, and I was yours
I thought you were mine, too
But now I see the closed door

I watch you laugh with others
and I have a secret
That is kept under cover
but I have not one regret

I can't take this ache
so I'm watching you go
and my pain starts to fade
but I still love you so


Alright, so I guess the warning should have been COMPLETE CRAP. I wrote this about a boy I loved for four years. It was excruciating.

[Sienna]

I feel your pain.

[Princess Cliche]

Thank God, I'm not the only one that's experienced that, then. None of my friends understood...

But I really loved him.

He just never really noticed me.

Le sigh.

[Timothy]

Very poignant. It really captures that feeling of melancholy when you have feelings for somebody and they aren't reciprocated. It's very easily related to my own life, which is the hallmark of good poetry.

[Princess Cliche]

Sept 27, 2012 23:12:15 GMT -5 Timothy said:

Very poignant. It really captures that feeling of melancholy when you have feelings for somebody and they aren't reciprocated. It's very easily related to my own life, which is the hallmark of good poetry.

Thanks!

Oh, gosh, you guys.

This is the first time I've shared this piece.

So I'm glad you think it's decent!

[a]

it's more than decent

it's amazing and can totally apply to anyone

i almost used amazayn

cringes

[Princess Cliche]

Thanks, so much Izzy!

And I would have been okay with it.

My sister uses it all the time.