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Post by Maya Your queen. on Sept 27, 2012 16:22:51 GMT -5
Hello! I recently came up with a story, *cough* Avaloop was my unknown Beta *cough* Anyways (: I have three main characters... Lilac, Naya (Sort of..) and Holland. Of course there are other characters but these characters have more interaction with eachother... I wasn't quite sure if I was supposed to make separate threads for each OFC but... YOLO Lilac;
Her Face Claim is Cintia Dicker.
Age; 17
Height; 5'8
Weight; 95 lbs
Hair color; Ginger
Eye color; Blue
Ex. Freckles
Im not completely sure what I want her personality to be... But I know that she has MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder) and She HAS to be shy and reserved... Ooooh BTW. Naya is her other persona. (But Lilac sees Naya, Like she's a real person. But she knows that Naya can control her body.) Naya
Her Face Claim is Blake Lively
Age; 17
Height; 5'8
Weight; 95 lbs
Hair color; Blonde
Eye color; Blue
Ex. N/A
Her personality is going to be really bitchy and stuck up, Dare devil, Confident but I still need more traits for her... Holland
Her Face Claim is Michelle Trachtenberg
Age; 15
Height; 5'6
Weight; 92 lbs
Hair color; Brown
Eye color; Blue
Ex. N/A
Her personality.... IDEK. She has to be very happy and Annoying.... Help meeeee? (; |
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Post by levi on Sept 27, 2012 16:31:15 GMT -5
So it seems like you were trying to make Lilac and Naya contrast by making them opposites.
You could give them more characteristics to contrast them unassertive timid and/or hesitant and then make Naya loud and rambunctious. You could also make the more similar seeing as they both of have control of Lilac's body.
I'm not sure I got exactly where Holland fits into to the story so would you mind telling me more about her?
Also I can help you as well with what the characters do if you would like.
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Post by a on Sept 27, 2012 16:36:13 GMT -5
Okay I think perhaps since Naya is like the opposite of Lilac, all her traits should be y'k?
Naya - Think of the bitchiest person you know, but think of what makes that person bitchy. Like... Rude, Feisty, Mean, Diva...
Lilac - Basically think of a shy person. Insecure, quiet.. etc
Holland - Um, she would have to be optimistic, kind, loud, random.. think of people that you know that are annoying
Good luck! hope it helped
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Post by Maya Your queen. on Sept 27, 2012 16:42:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the use of words that aren't a part of my vocabulary, Levi, You should know me by now. Naya is able to control Lilac's body, Since she is Lilac...
Holland, Is Lilac's Childhood friend, But Naya doesn't quite like her.... Because she's supposed to be happy all the time.. Sure you can help me my dear. I kind of have a good idea on what Naya might end up doing to Holland... |
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Post by levi on Sept 27, 2012 16:48:34 GMT -5
I see I see.
I agree with Lord Dipstick for Holland.
What kind of themes are you going for with this story? jw.
Like super heavy stuff or comedic?
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Post by Maya Your queen. on Sept 27, 2012 16:52:44 GMT -5
Ooooh Defo. Not comedic bro.
It is more of a Sympathy/Sad Story...
I know.
Lord Dipstick.
FTW. |
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Post by levi on Sept 27, 2012 16:56:31 GMT -5
Cool beans so do you know what you want your characters jobs or aspirations to be yet?
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Post by avalicious on Sept 27, 2012 16:57:03 GMT -5
AVALOOP omg this makes me want to write more of H&H. Okay, well heres the thing. I think having completely contrasting personalities is acceptable if the protagonist's alter ego has a link to the main personality. Like in my story, the connection my lead and her AE share is the trait of cowardly behavior. Although that won't be revealed until the characters have strong foundations to branch from. Good luck  |
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Post by Maya Your queen. on Sept 27, 2012 17:01:03 GMT -5
NO.
Their jobs...?
I haven't thought that far yet... Don't worry Ava. It's a whole different plot.
Yeeee. I guess They can both be... idek. It's hard to find something they can have in common because they're sooo different. |
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Post by Captain America on Sept 27, 2012 17:34:33 GMT -5
*that sad moment when I thought I had an original character name*
*sigh*
Holland is the name of the OCF in my fic
I mean
I have nothing against you doing it
but I wanted to be special
but go ahead
cause you're probs a better writer than me
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Post by Maya Your queen. on Sept 27, 2012 17:36:23 GMT -5
No boo.
Your probs a better writer than ME. |
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Post by Captain America on Sept 27, 2012 17:37:13 GMT -5
haha
no.
have you read my writing?
it sucks
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Post by Maya Your queen. on Sept 27, 2012 17:39:23 GMT -5
I actually haven't ..... *cough* Link me.
I DONT EVEN HAVE ANY FICS OUT ATM.
Besides Etu (Expect the unexpected)
And that's a group story... |
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Post by Captain America on Sept 27, 2012 17:42:02 GMT -5
The Chosen Oneand I have a lot of fics in process. five to be exact Overrun (a zombie fic) Holland Tunnel (with name twin #1) Dollhouse (doll fic, obvii) Lyrical Sorrows (it's awesome in my opinion) and Paper Airplanes (9/11 fic that I posted in the shredder)
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